Thursday 10 May 2012

Feedback on downshifting

Choose another student in the class to pair up with. Read their "Blog 10" and then write a couple of paragraphs as comments to the blog on these issues:
1. Does the essay do a good job offering a summary of the article?
2. Does the essay have a thesis?
3. Is there adequate downshifting in each of the body paragraphs? What level? Give evidence
4. Is there a good essay structure--one introductory paragraph, 2-3 body paragraphs, and a conclusion?
5. Is the thesis supported by the evidence?

Post your paragraphs as a comment to the writer's original post

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